Demos
Continuity before and after demos
Small manuscript examples that show a likely continuity issue and one possible way an author might repair it.
Before and after
Make the issue visible
Each demo is intentionally short so the continuity problem, evidence, and revision move are easy to inspect.
Before and after: a deadline that moves
A short demo showing how a deadline contradiction can be rewritten after a continuity finding.
Before and after: a character knows too much
A demo showing how to fix a scene where a character knows information they have not received.
Before and after: an object appears in the wrong hands
A short demo showing how to resolve an important object that moves without explanation.
Before and after: an emotional reset
A demo showing how to bridge a scene where a character's emotional state resets too quickly.