Character consistency

Sample report: character backstory drift

A sample Wise Wombat-style continuity report showing how character backstory drift can be surfaced with evidence.

Scenario

What the sample checks

A revised manuscript gives the same character two different childhood histories after a mid-draft subplot change.

Detected issue

The character's family history appears to shift from being raised by an aunt to being raised by both parents, with no scene explaining the change.

Evidence

Good continuity findings need source evidence. These sample passages show the kind of contrast an author reviews.

Chapter 4 sample: Mira tells Jon that Aunt Cass raised her after the winter plague.

This passage establishes Aunt Cass as the stable childhood guardian.

Chapter 18 sample: Mira remembers her parents teaching her every harbor code before she turned ten.

This later passage implies both parents were present during the same childhood period.

Report shape

The goal is a reviewable decision, not automatic rewriting.

The manuscript may be carrying an older backstory and a newer backstory at the same time.

The author can decide whether the parents survived longer, Aunt Cass arrived later, or one passage needs reframing.

Search related scenes for grief, inheritance, family secrets, and memories that depend on the same backstory.

Review

These are the practical follow-up moves the sample report points toward.

Confirm the canonical childhood timeline.
Update memory, dialogue, and relationship passages that depend on the old version.
Add a transition if the contradiction is intentional and reveals hidden information.

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