Glossary term

Character drift

Character drift is an accidental change in a character's stable facts, knowledge, motivation, emotion, presence, or voice.

Definition

What character drift means

Character drift happens when revision changes a person on the page without enough story cause. The drift may be factual, emotional, relational, motivational, or vocal.

Why it matters

Readers invest in characters by tracking who they are and what they know. Accidental drift can make a character feel inconsistent rather than complex.

Example

A character who does not know a secret in chapter 8 suddenly refers to it in chapter 10, although nobody has told them yet.

Wise Wombat

Wise Wombat checks character facts, knowledge, presence, names and titles, motivation, emotional state, relationships, and dialogue voice.